What i thought..

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: : : : I first read the screenplay for Dogma about a year ago. Out of boredom I wrote a sequel screenplay. It was purely for shits and giggles. Unfortunately I never finished it, but if anyone is at all interested there is a good chunk up on the net. I do have an outline hiding somewhere if anyone is sick enough to wonder about how it ends. : : Glorified toilet-paper? You be the judge. : : Let me make it very clear by-the-way, Kevin Smith, View Askew or anyone relating to said parties had nothing to do with this shoddy piece of work. It's my own drivel, written for the fans of Kevin Smith. Thank you kindly... : : Oh yeah, Smalls had nothing to do with it either... : : -- : : My e-mial's here folks, send any thoughts you might trip upon. ...Good bad or otherwise. : : -Moot : : hartford3rd@msn.com : : Here's waht i thought ok.. : It started off ok i guess, got boring in sections. : I liked the way you had Brodie and Banky in the same scene, something i'd like Kev to do sometime...(or Holden and Shannon or Dante nad Gil or whatever) : I disliked the amount bob was talkin, not exactly that he WAS talkin, just what he was saying..he seemed outta character too much. : There were a few mistakes:- : The cat's name is Lenin's Tomb. : The bit about the talk show was inaccurate cos the bit you had was set after Dogma, yet Brodie had already been on the tonight show and Walked off it (i think)..he was already on it judging by the picture on tricias wall in J and B 1...he had walked off cos of one of the clerks comics ( i think).. : thats about it.. : i didnt like any of the bits with Steve-Dave, maybe cos i didnt understand what was goin on..i just skimmed through it.. : another thing, a lot of the scenes were set in the same places as dogma, just in different order....(hospital, airport etc..) : ok.. : i'll leave ya alone.... : : wait..i did like the bit bout T.S and acting lessons though...

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