Posted by Mister_Muttin at proxy2-external.pr1.on.home.com on July 23, 2000 at 21:43:06:
I've written this script. I'm not going to post it here, or ask you to critique it for me or anything like that. Your job is much simpler then that.
Alright let me explain. I have as I've already stated written this screenplay. Feedback from those who were kind enough to read it - was
well great. Save two things.
1) Dallas, this is fucking long.
I took this as the constructive analysis of jealous cynical bastards, who were out to crush the fragile artist inside of me, trying to shatter my dreams and tempt me join them on the couch - watching FRIENDS, Contemptuously listening for the laugh track, so dead people can tell me me when Ross is being -*funny*. The truth is, I'm dialouge heavy and happy that way.
Fine, lets set that aside for now and focus on why I've asked you here.
Criticism number 2. Dallas, I don't belive anyone would pay to see a movie with a name like that. The name of the movie no one would see...
- PORNO MOUTH -
Now tell me. (this is the part where you get involved) All you know about this movie are the following things. It's a comedy. It's about a film student, an artist if you will, who through a series of misadventures (I like that..retard) ends up working for a porn studio.
laughter ensues ...sort of.
Is this a good title? Is this a movie you, knowing nothing else about it, would see? Does it make you laugh? Does it at least intrigue you?
These are questions I need answers to, and I believe your the only ones who can help as this is your kinda movie. So please post whatever you think I should do. Keep it or change it. go ahead, I can take it.
P.S. I bought DOGMA in a 711 for $8.99 this weekend. pretty sweet.