Posted by Kris Hanson at mheropdc.messagehero.com on September 07, 2000 at 14:48:27:
In Reply to: My idea for a movie, Feedback wanted posted by The Nooch on September 07, 2000 at 14:35:55:
. . . unless you're making an "art film," don't confuse your audience as to where they have to say "What the fuck is going on?" The only exception I have to that is if they laugh while saying it.
As for your "team losing" plot line . . . I've pondered that, myself . . . but that's kind of a bummer for the audience. It could work, though. I want to do a "guy doesn't get the girl and gets hit buy her boyfriend's car" plot line, but I haven't gotten to it yet.
--Kris