Posted by Rat_37 at spider-wq052.proxy.aol.com on April 13, 2001 at 11:54:38:
In Reply to: Quit defending it. posted by Alferd Packer on April 13, 2001 at 02:21:04:
Yeah i did post the script to get feedback and I know you gotta take the good with the bad, but it seems like he didn't read the whole thing and was offering a very broad criticism. If you want to help get specific, tell what part you really didn't like and why. As for the pop culture references, who doesn't like the occasional Gary Coleman joke (keep reading the script you can't miss it). Anyway here's how I think that scene should have been written...
: INSERT SHOT:
: Studio executive throws this script back at Rat_37.
: STUDIO EXECUTIVE
: Write something else without so many pop culture references, and then I'll fund-
: RAT_37
: Pop culture this.
Rat_37 takes a shit on the exec's desk.
: END INSERT SHOT.
: Good luck with it, dude.
Thanks. I hope you'll give it a chance and read it for yourself.