Re: It was ok...


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Posted by squiwi at dialup-20.insnet.com on April 15, 2001 at 14:39:57:

In Reply to: It was ok... posted by CraigStone on April 14, 2001 at 22:36:31:

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: It was ok, but I haven't read that much pointless conversation since "A Separate Peace" (John Knowles SUCKS!). Anyway, back to your script. There were too many scene changes early on. The audience needs to get familiar to one scene. Also, cut out some of the conversing, and add some more content.
: However, that's just my stupid opinion.

: --Craig (writing a script called 4 Dumb White Guys. It's only 5 pages long, so I really shouldn't criticize others)


When you finish, if you want we (Me and my friend Rat 37 who co-wrote this script) will be happy to read yours or give you any help along the way. We are far from experts on the subject, but we found that any thoughtful advice is helpful.




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