I didnt mind it....


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Posted by PretzelFan at cpe-61-9-208-141.qld.bigpond.net.au on October 29, 2001 at 03:20:13:

In Reply to: Good bit of dialogue... posted by TheGrandWazoo on October 29, 2001 at 00:10:49:

i didnt mind it, but there was something off and i dont know what it was, maybe its the use of the word proportinate in a sentance? Oh wait i remember, the men are pigs line repeated - because the character seemed more intellegent than to just repeat what they said before. Not that it was the most witty phrase to start with.



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