Posted by Piscez at res109b-158.rh.rit.edu on January 20, 2002 at 20:34:31:
In Reply to: Re: Hey, wanna read my short script. posted by Rkelly38 on January 20, 2002 at 19:16:10:
: IT'S GOOD, FOR A SHORT FLICK, IF YOU WHERE TO MAKE SOMETHING MORE OF IT, YOU WOULD NEED ALOT MORE BACKSTORY, I REALLY DIDN'T GET THE FEELING OF WHAT PROBLEMSTHIS KID HAD ,OBSESSION IS ONE THING, BUT VIOLENT OBSESSION
DEVELOPS FROM ALOT OF OTHER THINGS, IT READ SORT OF LIKE "A BETTER PLACE" NEAR THE END, MY OPINION IS GREAT IDEA, MAYBE WOULD WORK BETTER AS A FULL LENGTH INSTEAD OF A SHORT, BUT THEN AGAIN I MIGHT NOT KNOW MY ASS FROM MY ELBOW, AND IF THAT WHAT YOU GOT FROM THIS, JUST DISREGAURD, HOPE I HELPED
So yeah, maybe its a lot to cram into 8 minutes. Theres a lot of stuff I would like to add, but can't, because I need to keep it short and have it managable for the actors, who will just be other kids in the class.
And they're young college students, so, no bars for them.
Thanks for the feedback :-)