Screenplay - need opinions/suggestions (REPOST)

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Posted by thatsclutch at h0002e3237bd6.ne.client2.attbi.com on April 16, 2002 at 21:50:23:

This is a repost, as the last post was cut off on the old board and some of the people who were reading the screenplay may have not been able to find the old post to post their comments... thanks to anyone who has helped me, or willing to help me with their views...
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This is a very first draft of a film being written for independent production in Summer 2002. NOTE: It is copyrighted using various script submission services.

I am looking for opinions and suggestions to help improve this script.

It's a road trip coming of age DRAMA following four kids on the run to canada.

PLEASE, if you begin to read this... finish it before making a judgement. Also, there is alot of technical camera direction in this production first draft. It should be able to figure out... if not skip it and it should be just fine...

it's a very EASY read.

thanks, and I await your constructive criticism @ slammer@thatsclutch.com .

You can read the script @

http://www.thatsclutch.com/movie/UNTITLEDROAD.htm

Peter

http://www.thatsclutch.com/movie/UNTITLEDROAD.htm

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I have a suggestion! Ozma 21:57:27 4/16/02 (2)
- Or maybe even... JCatherine 23:54:42 4/16/02 (1)
  - Oh, come on.... Ozma 01:35:59 4/17/02 (0)

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: This is a repost, as the last post was cut off on the old board and some of the people who were reading the screenplay may have not been able to find the old post to post their comments... thanks to anyone who has helped me, or willing to help me with their views... : ---------- : This is a very first draft of a film being written for independent production in Summer 2002. NOTE: It is copyrighted using various script submission services. : I am looking for opinions and suggestions to help improve this script. : It's a road trip coming of age DRAMA following four kids on the run to canada. : PLEASE, if you begin to read this... finish it before making a judgement. Also, there is alot of technical camera direction in this production first draft. It should be able to figure out... if not skip it and it should be just fine... : it's a very EASY read. : thanks, and I await your constructive criticism @ slammer@thatsclutch.com . : You can read the script @ : http://www.thatsclutch.com/movie/UNTITLEDROAD.htm : Peter

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