Posted by Pimped-Out-Jedi-Knight at webcacheb07a.cache.pol.co.uk on May 21, 2002 at 10:55:44:
In Reply to: That's what I was missing! posted by The Bastard (ebas420) on May 21, 2002 at 10:43:22:
If Daniel Rimms had known what the coming weeks had in store, he would have ended his life there and then to avoid the pain. The violence and loss that loomed on the horizon, all in his search for the truth... perhaps it could have been averted. However, blind as to what the future held, he stumbled into his fate... no matter how terrible it might be.
One thing he did know was the station wagon was still there, parked across the street. Always nervous around the police, now more so than ever, Daniel walked on. He hoped it was nothing more than his own paranoia again, but inside, he knew better...
---Anyway, that's my take on it. Sorry if you think I've just butchered it, but without knowing any more details of the plot etc., but that's how I'd do it.