Need to correct some errors

Posted by KoRnMammA at client-151-199-192-154.henrico.k12.va.us on May 21, 2002 at 11:19:01:

In Reply to: Yeah... posted by KoRnMammA on May 21, 2002 at 11:16:34:

If I was to read just those 2 paragraphs. But I usually read the back of the book 1st.
You need to answer the question that the reader is askin themselves is this going to be
a comedy, romance, investigataion, etc. it seems kinda dole but thats probably, its
only 2 paragraphs. Now if I read the whole 1st ch. and it was dole than that would be
a problem.

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• ummm yeah...I'm not sure if you're my demographic. The Bastard (ebas420) 11:25:37 5/21/02 (7)
  • what? KoRnMammA 11:28:26 5/21/02 (6)
    • Worst excuse ever... miss d 12:33:06 5/21/02 (0)
    • Yeah... The Bastard (ebas420) 11:30:32 5/21/02 (4)
      • LOL...okay, that was good . NT razordu30 11:37:03 5/21/02 (0)
      • ok... KoRnMammA 11:33:44 5/21/02 (2)
        • THREAD OF THE DAY! The Bastard (ebas420) 11:41:04 5/21/02 (1)
          • Agreed. NT razordu30 11:47:18 5/21/02 (0)
• Need to correct a few more errors? *nt* miss d 11:21:48 5/21/02 (5)
  • Sorry..... KoRnMammA 11:45:16 5/21/02 (0)
  • She's got it in for old Bob... Pimped-Out-Jedi-Knight 11:25:21 5/21/02 (3)
    • No, actually... KoRnMammA 11:30:09 5/21/02 (2)
      • Yeah! I tooootally agree... EmbryoPointZero 11:41:53 5/21/02 (1)
        • Hey now... KoRnMammA 11:49:55 5/21/02 (0)

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