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Posted by ElfGirl at ras2-94.dial.metalink.net on July 08, 2002 at 09:56:00:

In Reply to: runner up for VA writing challenge, part deux posted by The Bastard on July 08, 2002 at 09:52:16:

: This was actually on of my favorites, and I'm happy it scored this well. It was written by none other than Pixies Chick

: Just bout Bob

:
: Silent Bob pulled the screendoor again, trying to latch it, then felt the hinge
: pull away as the door fell off. Home sweet home. He sighed and set down the bag
: of groceries he had carried in, and walked over to the phone to see if he had
: any calls. No, none.

: Bob pulled the casserole out of the freezer and set it on the counter before
: seeing the mail that Jay had put there. Condensation soaked the paper and the
: ink smeared when he tried to pull it off. As if he didn’t have enough of that at
: his printing job. He pushed the bag of groceries aside, set the cassarole in the
: sink, and sorted through the mail, trying to see if anything had value.

: “What happened with the door, dad?” Jay asked.

: Bob shrugged and smiled. Jay set his books on the counter and turned on the
: oven. Jay was about thirteen and skinny as a rail. Must have been something
: about that age that made it seem impossible to contain the energy he possessed
: in such a narrow space. Sometimes it seemed to leak right out of him, as if he
: actually could be in two places at once. To Bob’s mind, he often was – one part
: of him seated with his books, the other floating above the world. Bob often
: felt in awe of this young man.

: “Your friend called again,” Jay said, “The one you were with when you met mom.
: He says he’s in town for this convention and he wants us to go. Have you talked
: to him?”

: Bob shook his head, shrugged, and turned back to the sink. He really couldn’t
: explain why he hadn’t talked with Jay, or why he hadn’t given him the address
: right away when they had moved this last time. Jay, the other Jay, had been his
: best friend, “hetero-lifemate,” until this change in their circumstances. It had
: been a dozen years since he had seen him. Maybe a dozen years is enough.

:
: Bob pulled the folder close in under his jacket and focused on the bobbing head
: of the young teen walking ahead of him into the crowd. The tables were thick
: with comics and it seemed the jostling crowd didn’t care about the cargo Bob was
: guarding.

: “So that guy with the beard, he knew you a long time ago?” Jay asked.

: Bob smiled and nodded.

: “What?” Jay asked. “He knew you before?”

: “Yes,” Bob coughed. He cleared his throat, “Banky knew me and Jay from before I
: met your mom.”

: Jay smiled wryly, “So that’s the Jay I’m named after? He’s kinda… uh… Dad, is he
: kinda different than when you knew him?”

: Bob suppressed a laugh. “No, not at all.”

: “And you went across country with him and mom? Didn’t he make you crazy? He’s so
: loud,” Jay said.

: Bob did laugh this time. “I used to like that a lot. Uh, Jay did a lot of the
: talking for me. Jay… had ideas. I followed him around a lot.”

: “YOU followed HIM?” Jay’s jaw dropped. “Dad, that guy couldn’t find his way
: around this arena, and this place is ROUND. How did you manage to keep from…. I
: mean, how did you get stuff done?”

: “There just wasn’t that much to do,” Bob replied. “You think a lot. Bethany read
: to you a lot. Maybe that’s why. We just didn’t. Jay and I just didn’t.”

: Bob saw the shadows in the young man’s eye and regretted mentioning Bethany.
: Four weeks this time, and they hadn’t heard a word yet.

: “Dad, that Daredevil you got signed – what did you have him write? You didn’t
: want me to hear what you said to him. What’s up?”

: They’d reached the outside of the arena, and Bob pulled the book from his coat.
: He paused and leaned against the car.

: “I don’t get everything you read. I don’t get a lot of the heavy stuff you talk
: about. Since that …”
: Bob paused and looked up, composing himself. Why was it always so hard to talk
: about this? About anything?

: He started again, “Since that group targeted your mom for working in that
: clinic, I know you got a bum deal. Your life is just too different from what it
: was. I don’t know what to say about it. Maybe your mom can talk with you
: sometime about all that.
: “I wanted to tell you one thing, though. When she asked me if I could watch you
: for a while, I didn’t get it at first. I didn’t know what all that would mean.
: Uh, what, what I mean...
: “I got this book though. The guy in this book, he can’t see. He has problems,
: too.”
: Bob cleared his throat. “Uh, but he gets this thing that happens to him. He gets
: a kid. He’s a superhero and he gets to raise this kid that somebody leaves him.
: That’s the story.
: “I guess, uh… I guess I feel like that. I guess I feel like I got lucky like
: that, too.”




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