The Premise For My First Script, Please read!

Posted by Son Of Silent Bob at aca692cb.ipt.aol.com on August 07, 2002 at 13:14:33:

I've written 20 plus pages of my first screenplay based on my personal experinences. Please read and review with your opinions. The title is "How People Change".
A kid who is graduating from highschool has an unrecipricated crush on 3 different girls. He makes a vow to meet with each of the three girls 10 years after their graduation for a date and to see what has changed and wheter or not he still has a chance.
Critics are more than welcome, Please reply

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• not only does the title suck,but the plot would skunksmokinsnoogans 16:45:11 8/07/02 (0)
• Re: The Premise For My First Script, Please read! Son Of Silent Bob 16:41:43 8/07/02 (0)
• Title:One Phat Chance. Well? nt fluffy 14:01:07 8/07/02 (0)
• It shows potential cclarke 13:20:07 8/07/02 (0)
• Idea sounds great, but seriously Bojo-Pimp (Verbatim) 13:16:07 8/07/02 (3)
  • Ditto MichelleInMichigan 13:17:47 8/07/02 (2)
    • Re: Ditto Son Of Silent Bob 13:24:21 8/07/02 (1)
      • I knew I recognised your email *NT* Bojo-Pimp (Verbatim) 13:28:36 8/07/02 (0)

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