Posted by speshalboyye at ny-chicagostreet6e-175.buf.adelphia.net on December 31, 2002 at 18:46:58:
In Reply to: Re: please just watch it then tell me how you feel posted by Choo Choo Andee on December 30, 2002 at 14:16:46:
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: : if you could please watch my movie then tell me how you feel about ti I would greatly appreciate it. but please only post in this topic after you watch it. Thank you very much.
: I think for that length of a movie you need much more content.....The Majority of the short was
: At the computer
: "hey dude are you wacking off".........."no man, I'm not wacking off"
: At dining room table
: "hey man, are you wacking off in my house" "no man, I'm not wacking off"
: On the couch
: "hey man, you wouldn't happen to be wacking off, now would you" "no way, I'm reading, I'm not wacking off"
: You can't drill something like that into someones head over and over again, it's very repetitive. Also, to show the actual cum shot and huge ball was pretty disgusting........go for more of a plot, don't rely on vulgar stuff for a laugh, it's an easy joke, I think you can be vulgar but not for a full 13 minutes (the entire length of the short).....
I'm sorry if you thought the dialog was repetative but it was all adlibed so it was just waht we said. And without the Cum shot and the huge nut there wouldnt have been much to it... and what about movies like Van Wilder and Tomcats which both showed some questionably vulgar yet funny stuff? But I do thank you for your opinion. :)