Posted by agentray at user-2ivelbe.dialup.mindspring.com on January 19, 2003 at 18:47:38:
In Reply to: that was pathetic.... posted by stubblyjoe on January 19, 2003 at 17:35:02:
If you read it and put more thought into it than maybe you all would see that I was showing you how dumb the main charater was being. But, he also did not justify his actions with truth so I do think that the out come would have been different if he did. Sarah means the world to Ray (which i forgot to disclose). I think the way to best sum this up would be to say that Ray was on his way to a flower garden but before he got to the flower garden he passed by a flower shop just to take a look at other imported flowers that wouldn't be at the garden that he is a custom to visiting.
: not only was the moral and subject matter totaly and utterly off the mark, but the narrative was just terrible. i mean who talks like that, that is fuckin baby talk!
: you dont deserve a girl anyway, just you stick to pam (who the fuck calls it rosie?) and her five sisters
: you, my friend, are an asshole!