I wasn't going to nitpick...


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Posted by VioLenT BoB (Dr.J0nes) at njtnt-1-383.dialup.enter.net on January 19, 2003 at 20:28:10:

In Reply to: Travis, Stubbyjoe, amanda22 posted by agentray on January 19, 2003 at 18:52:08:

: Sorry you did like my "story" Fictional it was. Open minded and re read it you must.

It wasn't a fucking story. Stories are written in groupings of sentences commonly referred to as paragraphs. They don't have "RAY: I'm such a kick ass guy." lines, alone by themselves on the page.

That does not a story make champ. You can't open your mind and reread a piece of shit. Well, you could but what would be the point? Leave the fables to Aesop and stick to annoying people on the internet. That's my advice to you.

but just so you get it:

VB: Hey, yo, Stop writting Stizzies and stick to bein Annizie.

Oh and by the way its accustomed not a custom. Just one word, Chief.

Yours truly,
VEEBS



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