Posted by Kimberlieo at ac994e34.ipt.aol.com on January 24, 2003 at 00:22:01:
In Reply to: OK..Sounds kind of deep..a little personal... posted by BChrist on January 24, 2003 at 00:15:13:
kind of a collection of images that came to me today. Firstly the grave thing, and how frightening to be buried, but how comforting to have an end to ....well I guess lifes tramas. Then later in the day I remebered being buried at the beach as a child by my younger sister, and how that was not at all frightening, fun, but odd. I take comfort in sleeping under heavy blankets. So the blanket of sod is somehow finding comfort in release. Don't know, I am just playing with the images for now. I want to build a cadence into it. Maybe work with other aspects of "buried". Repression and release.
I have not written in about 12 years. Just picked it up today for kicks. A coffee house will o that to ya (though honestly I wrote the sod bit before I found the coffee house.
Kimberlieo
: At first glance, sounds fine.
: Pale skin a personal trait. About crawling into earth, maybe looking for a little peace and quiet. Blisters and grit, something harsh maybe a disturbing force, something as a result of not being able to move?