Posted by cowgoesmoo at m25-mp1.cvx2-b.ltn.dial.ntli.net on March 17, 2003 at 19:23:16:
In Reply to: Re: That's good they way you have it.*nt* posted by cowgoesmoo on March 17, 2003 at 19:22:15:
: I changed it a bit and it sounds pretty fucking good. I think that seeing as today was the day when I progressed from newbie status to occasional poster I would treat all you guys on the board with the section of the book I just asked for advice on - although this is particularly for you fluffy, seeing as you were the only person who replied. I HATE YOU ALL. No, i love you all really. Here you are:
: My father’s ‘fucking’ talk was very brief and very blunt. It was basically as follows.
: “You get your cock. You shove it in the woman, have some fun, 9 months later you've got a little shit machine crawling around the house and sucking your wife's nipples dry while you have to be content jerking off to low grade porn until the kid is old enough to leave home.”
: I’ll tell you what, my pops was a man of few words but when he spoke, the whole world listened.
: Bollocks to that. It was the biggest load of shit I’ve ever heard, although that was my whole perception of sex until I got back to the United Kingdom some three months later.
: : : Right guys, I'm doing some work on my book now and it is now midnight in the UK.
: : Basically I thought it'd be fun to get some VA ideas into this book, so I'm looking for
: : you guys to give me some ideas.
: : :
: : : Right now in the narrative, my main character is eleven years old and is being told
: : about 'the birds and the bees' by his father while he is slugging down whisky with
: : him thinking it is 'extra sour apple juice.' His father is a drug-addicted monkey
: : handler at the Primate Centre he works at in South Africa, and he is stoned and
: : drunk so I'm thinking that his description should be blunt and brief, along the lines
: : of:
: : : "You get your cock. You shove it in the woman, have some fun, 9 months later
: : you've got a little shit machine crawling around the house."
: : : Any ideas?
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