Posted by Gabe S. at user-2ivfd3k.dialup.mindspring.com on March 27, 2003 at 22:32:36:
Okay, there's this guy.. (17) he's a little overweight.. the loner type. He's got this huge crush on this girl he's known since kindergarten.. They've always been friends.. But he wants more.. He's to shy to let her know his true feelings. At school he always gets made fun of, he's the fat guy- One night at home he wrote this girl a letter telling her how much he cares for her. He didn't intend on giving it to her, he was just venting. Somehow, i haven't worked that out.. The letter winds up in the hands of the girl.. He doesn't know it.. She starts distancing herself from him in school, won't even look at him when they pass in the halls. He doesn't realize what's going on.. He checks his backpack and realized that the letter is gone.. He's blown away.. He makes it through the rest of the day with the usual "fatass" comments.. he's developed a shield over the years.. It's after school.. he sees the girl in the hall and starts to approach her.. She's got this look of.. I'm not sure.. Like she wants to talk to him and all.. But she's around her friends and as he approaches and says "hi.. (name).. can we talk?".. she blurts out something like.. "what do you want chubs?".. He's devistated.. He turns and goes home to kill himself.. I'm working on the introduction to the thing and all as we speak.. I know I'm just sayint it because it's my idea.. But I think it's sort of original.. It's going to have one of those endings where you think everything is okay then BANG! curveball.. And you're left with the Oh my God.. as the credits roll.. How does it sound.. Be honest..
Gabe
If you've already read this.. Oh well.. sorry.. New board merrits a repost.. woo hoo..