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Posted by whatandwhy76 at 105.3.171.66.subscriber.vzavenue.net on May 18, 2003 at 17:14:11:

In Reply to: Just wondering... posted by Chason on May 18, 2003 at 16:56:52:

: I know the board hates me and so on and so on but after all...This is the only place where i can talk to people with similar interests.

: I've been writing this script lately and theres something about it that i really like. It seems like it would really be attractive to a major studio. It's the only script i've ever written that is mainstream in a way and all types of action audiences would love.

: Mind you it's the first action script i've ever worked on. If i can compare it to the something i can say it is Scarface meets American Pie meets Cruel Intentions.

: The action sequences i've written in the script are very nice and very violent. I love writing all these crazy action scenes. Theres plenty of story and all the other elements of a script but the script is not shy when it comes to killing people.

: In the movie a very rich teen goes on a trip with some friends to Hawaii. He starts a drug dealing circle there that explodes, he begins making his way up in the drug dealing chain and begins making more money than any other average 19 year old.

: My favorite part of the movie is the relationship. The main character is lonely and doesnt have to many real friends (most are just attracted to his power) But when another lonely person is assigned to bring him down the story gets turned upside down. The main character develops a relationship(not sexual) with the detective who is sent to proove he is a drug dealer.

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: At the end some of the main characters friends betray him (rob him) and he goes crazy and kills everyone. He then kills himself after getting in a major gun fight with the local authorities. The movie ends with the detective (who i imagine being played by Colin Farell) standing over the main characters body crying.

: Although highly unrealistic and highly unbelieveable the movie has a good message and is very entertaining.

: Would anyone like to give it a read?

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: : I know the board hates me and so on and so on but after all...This is the only place where i can talk to people with similar interests. : : I've been writing this script lately and theres something about it that i really like. It seems like it would really be attractive to a major studio. It's the only script i've ever written that is mainstream in a way and all types of action audiences would love. : : Mind you it's the first action script i've ever worked on. If i can compare it to the something i can say it is Scarface meets American Pie meets Cruel Intentions. : : The action sequences i've written in the script are very nice and very violent. I love writing all these crazy action scenes. Theres plenty of story and all the other elements of a script but the script is not shy when it comes to killing people. : : In the movie a very rich teen goes on a trip with some friends to Hawaii. He starts a drug dealing circle there that explodes, he begins making his way up in the drug dealing chain and begins making more money than any other average 19 year old. : : My favorite part of the movie is the relationship. The main character is lonely and doesnt have to many real friends (most are just attracted to his power) But when another lonely person is assigned to bring him down the story gets turned upside down. The main character develops a relationship(not sexual) with the detective who is sent to proove he is a drug dealer. : : : : At the end some of the main characters friends betray him (rob him) and he goes crazy and kills everyone. He then kills himself after getting in a major gun fight with the local authorities. The movie ends with the detective (who i imagine being played by Colin Farell) standing over the main characters body crying. : : Although highly unrealistic and highly unbelieveable the movie has a good message and is very entertaining. : : Would anyone like to give it a read?

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