Posted by Scott Lee AKA Rnswithscissors at 12-223-211-192.client.insightbb.com on June 02, 2003 at 20:23:54:
In Reply to: Re: Nice Job BTW. *NT posted by Scott Lee AKA Rnswithscissors on June 02, 2003 at 20:18:29:
The content is pretty good. Needs punctuation and capitalization. Shall I define those for you?
The art content is good. Perhaps no punctuation or capitalization is your style. If so, good job!
: : losing my soul
: : all of my being
: : purpose is gone
: : nothing left worth seeing
: : is it drifting away
: : or even still real
: : maybe it's still there
: : but inside I can't feel
: : If you see my soul
: : please send it back
: : I would like to know myself
: : and get this burden off my back