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Posted by anomynous at adsl-67-119-218-75.dsl.sktn01.pacbell.net on June 09, 2003 at 22:16:38:

Mike is standing in the kitchen, gun pointed down the hall directly at the back of Carlos’s head in the Living Room..

As they pass him

Chris
You fuck up, your dads is dead homie.

Chris and manuel walk into the living room

Carlos is just staring at the fight, he looks like he fell asleep, although, we are looking at the back of his head.

They turn to the bedroom and Chris looks down the hall in the opposite direction. He can see the light of the bathroom lacing the closed door, the sink is going.

Chris pushes the back of the gun into Manuel a little harder.
He takes a few quick steps and enters the room. Chris closes the door behind them.

Chris
Where is the shit

Manuel points to the closet.

Chris
Get it for me

Manuel walks towards the closet, opens it and kneels. He lifts the cover to the floor panel and tries the combination. He is so nervous he keeps fucking it up.

Chris
Calm the fuck down and get the shit right

Manuel
Alright, I’m sorry, I am fucking scared, I…….

Chris
Stop talkin’

Chris looks over to the window at the side of the house. He points the gun at Manuel backs up a few paces and opens it, it slides up, there is no screen. Perfect for him to make a getaway, A big fence blocks the view of the next house over.

Manuel gets it open

Chris comes close and takes a look.

He seems to be smiling under his mask

He unzips his Jumpsuit a little and pulls out a large duffel bag.

Chris
Put it all in here, fast

Chris hands him the duffel and Manuel opens it and starts filling it up with the shit. He finishes in a hurry.

Chris
Where is the money

Manuel grimaces
Manuel
Ah, come on man

Chris
Where is it.

Manuel looks up to the attic cover.

Chris
Well, hurry the fuck up.

Manuel gets up, he has to roll on his fat body to do so.

Chris
Jesus Christ man, you are a fucking piece of fat shit

Manuel starts to cry again

He opens the cover and pulls down the case.

Chris
Put in the combination and hand it to me. Chris flings the duffel over his head as Manuel puts in the combination. He hands Chris the case.

Chris
Get in the closet, now.

Manuel backs up

Chris
Get on the floor bitch

Manuel rolls his fat ass on the floor.

Chris
If you fucking move, if that fucking door opens, your dad gets a hot one, my partner knows to shoot if that door fucking opens.

Manuel
Ok

Chris shuts the closet door.



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