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: He puts the gun in his jumpsuit and with briefcase and bag in tow, climbs through the window. : He drops to the gound on the side of the house, It leads to the backyard. Just as he is passing the bathroom window the light turns off. Chris speeds up. : He takes off at a trot and hears the car waiting again. : He passes by the backdoor screen and taps it lightly. : Mike turns and retreats, he backpedals with gun raised. : As soon as Mike is clear they turn down the path and trot towards the gate. : As they approach they hear a bunch of voices : MEXICAN O.S. : What the fuck a, should I just fucking go up there, my fucking Primo never shuts down shop holmes. : Chris and Mike hurry to either side of the fence and look at each other. : Its RUDY, Rubens cousin, he is the last guy they need to deal with right now. : Chris looks back at the house and notices Rubens mom walking back to the kitchen. : They are fucked : To Chris’s horror, fatman Carlos comes around the corner, cryin and sweating and shit. : Without thinking, Chris charges back towards the house. : O.S. : The sound of a car door opening : Chris slams himself to the grass on the side of the pavement just as Rudy pops his head over the fence far enough to see in the house. His view of the backyard is blocked. : Chris can still see Carlos, he pulls out his gun just as he is approaching his mom hysterically. : Carlos : Ma….. : Carlos looks out the screen door and freezes in fear : He can see the gun pointed right at his mom’s head. : She turns to him : MOM : Mijo, whats wrong : He looks from the gun to her. : Carlos : I;m ok, I just have a bad headache or something : MOM : Oh nijo, hear let me get you…… : RUDY O.S. : Yells : Carlos, whats up eh, where is Ruben : his mom starts to tyrn to look out the screen but Carlos stops her. : Carlos : No mom, yeah, go get me something please : His mom exits the kitchen : Carlos walks closer to the screen : He is staring blankly : He takes a deep breath, from the corner of his eye he can see the gun pointed at him : He notices another man close to the fence with his gun pointed right through it, if he shot, It would hit Rudy. : Carlos : He took off eh, ummm…he is out with Sonia. : Rudy pauses for a beat : Rudy : Sonia, Sonia is in my backseat holmes. We were supposed to pick him up.

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