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Posted by Eyesonly at host217-35-66-251.in-addr.btopenworld.com on June 09, 2003 at 22:20:49:

In Reply to: Shut the fuck up... *nt* posted by Gabe on June 09, 2003 at 22:14:56:

: : They each sit in silence for a beat.

: : Chris cocks back the hammer and JD fires up the ride.

: : Fade to black

: : TITLE SHOT, wait 2 beats.

: : Loud Audio O.S.

: : Like its right against the microphone.

: : The sound of a buzzer, a type of doorbell.

: : EXT. DRUG DEALER BACKYARD- NIGHT

: : This is the house of a local drug dealer. It’s a single story house on the bad side of town. This house is on H street. H street is all Mexicans, esa’s, the hardest mother fuckers that you don’t want to fuck with. There is a lot of traffic down H street and its mainly for the drug dealers, they are all in competition with each other, a lot of murders go down on H street. Nobody trusts anybody.

: : The funny thing about H street is that you see a lot of nice cars coming and going. A lot of high school and college kids that are scared shitless but have to come here to score. They come and go as quick as possible.

: : The cars roll up in the alley behind the houses, all the houses have fences in the back with doors. This house has a cement walkway straight to the gate in back, the dealers rigged a bell outside the door so that these whiteboys just ring the buzzer and stay in there cars.

: : A Mexican kid walks out from the back door and walks to the gate. There is a peephole in the gate.

: : A car full of whiteboys in letterman jackets sits in a fancy looking camaro, its loud engine humming.

: : The Mexican kid is the son of the dealer in the house, he takes all the orders and serves up the grub. His name is Ruben.

: : Ruben
: : What’cha need fellas.

: : JOCK #1
: : Two 8-balls

: : Ruben
: : Ye-yo

: : JOCK #1 looks around in confusion. The guy in the passenger seat nods

: : JOCK#1
: : Yeah, that’s it.

: : Ruben
: : Two hun son

: : Ruben unhooks the latch on the gate and opens it, he looks both ways down the alley before taking the money.

: : Ruben grabs the money and shines a flashlight in the car, he lights up a carload of four, all whiteboys. He stops on one in the backseat.

: : Jock #2
: : Sup Ruben

: : Ruben knows this kid from school so he figures its all right.

: : Ruben
: : Ah, whats up holmes, alright, be right back

: : Ruben turns and closes the gate again, he walks up the path into the house.

: : INT- DRUG DEALER HOUSE

: : Ruben walks through the kitchen where there are large pots on the stove and pans full of food lacing the counter top. Authentic Mexican food, rice, meat, beans.

: : He walks through the kitchen and heads out to the living room.

: : The living room is well kept, for a shitty house they have some pretty nice stuff. There are a couple of older men watching UFC on a big screen.

: : Ruben walks through the living room into a bedroom on the side.

: : The bedroom is clean, nice bed, some Mexican pieces on the walls, and a nice asain style hutch in the far corner.

: : Ruben opens the closet, there is a floor panel, he opens it and there is a safe down below, it’s a big safe, It takes a combination. Ruben gives it a few spins and opens it. The safe holds various drugs packaged for selling. Weed and Coke mainly. There is some crank and heroine but those are in smaller volumes.

: : Ruben reaches in and pulls out two coke viles.

: : He shuts the safe and gives the combo a spin. He replaces the floor panel.

: : Ruben looks up towards the attic cover, he lifts it up and pushes it aside. He pulls down a briefcase. It has two combinations. He sets it on the floor, puts in the numbers and opens it.

: : It is full of cash, all separated in different denominations.

: : He inserts the two hundred with the rest of the hundreds closes the case locks it, flips the numbers, and puts it back in the attic.

: : He replaces the cover and walks out of the room.




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