I need Feedback on my script

Posted by Star Wars Fan at webwarper.expr.net on July 28, 2003 at 01:14:04:

I have written a script for STAR WARS EPISODE III.

I am pretty proud of it and I would welcome any feedback that I could get on it.

It is on a Geocities page. You might have to type in the URL.

http://www.geocities.com/bossnass2002/starwars_episodeiii.htm

Thanks,

You can also read it in a better WORD formatted version at:
http://www.geocities.com/bossnass2002/fanscript_epiii.doc

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• i will read it later tonight when i go home Alameda Whipsnake 01:38:17 7/28/03 (1)
  • Thanks nt Star Wars Fan 01:44:17 7/28/03 (0)
• Why do you need feedback? nogoodnick 01:24:22 7/28/03 (1)
  • Re: Why do you need feedback? Star Wars Fan 01:43:44 7/28/03 (0)
• feedback Xraptor 01:23:54 7/28/03 (1)
  • Oh, I have done that Star Wars Fan 01:40:59 7/28/03 (0)

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