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: what happens if: : INT. CAB- they have slammed through the gate successfully, but Jim is now obviously seriously injured. : JIM : >MOAN< gurgle... : SALINA : Hold on Jim. Where going to get you to a hospital! Hanna, hurry we've got to get him to a hospital! : CUT TO: : INT. HOSPITAL- The Hospital from the beginning. We see a long hallway. Suddenly, HANNA breaks into the shot, grabs a hospital bed, and rolls it off hurridly, obviously in HIGH DRAMA. : SALINA : We can do this Hanna, we can do this. : HANNA (Looking through a cabinet of meds) : I don't know what any of this stuff is Salina! Adrenaline? : SALINA : Yes! : HANNA : Barbituates? : SALINA (Louder now) : YES! : - HANNA runs over and gives the meds to Salina, and now we all better start getting worried because JIM is obviously NOT breathing, and HANNA is WORRIED, but doesn't know what to do, and SALINA is shaking so bad, that she can hardly load the shot with adrenaline. Miraculously she gets it in his arm, without effect. : HANNA and SALINA start pumping his chest. : SALINA- : Breathe DAMMIT! : Jim doesn't breathe. HANNA and SALINA start to sob uncontrolllably. : HANNA : What are we going to do now?... : (beat) SALINA doesn't answer... : HANNA : Salina?!? What are we supposed to do now? : SALINA : ... Ill tell you what we do. We keep moving. : - and the silent resolve on her face says EVERYTHING. That they feel doomed. That she feels naive for believing for a moment that there was more important things than survival. That she has given in to the harsh reality that she cannot save HANNA from knowing that too. : SALINA : Grab everything you can : -they scramble to get things together and run out of the hospital room, and in long strides move down the empty hall, alone together. : FADE TO BLACK : I should charge you 7 bucks for that!

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