Posted by tommybruce at adsl-67-113-85-40.dsl.lsan03.pacbell.net on August 25, 2003 at 21:16:06:
It's very entertaining. I like it. I stongly suggest you cut out about 60 percent of the curses. It just seems like WAY too much, it takes away from the dialog and makes you seem unintelligent. Im sure you can find replacement words. Im a fan of dirty languge and im not saying you should cut it all out, just most of it. I just wanted to say that, and ill give a more detailed opinion after i take a real good look at it. But from what i see here, is the makings of good entertainment