I think its a fitting opening to the novel.

Posted by adamapple76 at 151.196.186.17 on September 21, 2003 at 12:59:29:

In Reply to: please read this, and please be brutal posted by The Bastard on September 21, 2003 at 12:20:54:

I think it introduces the character well. But how about how she got in the room with him? Shouldnt the introduction go back to when he picked her up?

Adam

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