Posted by Ana Ng at d143e88c.dsl.flashcom.net on July 18, 2000 at 17:07:28:
In Reply to: Need some critcism posted by Assassin on July 18, 2000 at 16:29:50:
All of the characters from different cliques start talking to each other, which is entirely unrealistic. Also, the characters are too stereotypical.
Also, this board probably isn't the best place to post something like this.
: I was wondering if you guys/gals wouldn't mind checking out somethign that i wrote for my video productions class eariler this year. Its a script, it won't take long. And if you do, if you could give me some feedback. Its called DayDreams. Thanks in advance.