Need some critcism

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Posted by Assassin at proxy2-external.elcjn1.sdca.home.com on July 18, 2000 at 16:29:50:

I was wondering if you guys/gals wouldn't mind checking out somethign that i wrote for my video productions class eariler this year. Its a script, it won't take long. And if you do, if you could give me some feedback. Its called DayDreams. Thanks in advance.

DayDreams

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Breakfast club? NT remain 14:35:27 7/19/00 (0)
Nice effort, but could use work, please read on... Sarcasmo 19:42:42 7/18/00 (2)
- Thank you. Assassin 19:49:16 7/18/00 (1)
  - You're welcome; if u need any more advice, ask. nt Sarcasmo 02:19:39 7/19/00 (0)
Re: Need some critcism Ana Ng 17:07:28 7/18/00 (0)
Re: Need some critcism TrentReno 16:59:53 7/18/00 (3)
- Well duh Assassin 17:07:07 7/18/00 (2)
  - Great Walter Sobchak impression *nt* Darth Mabel 18:15:16 7/18/00 (0)
  - LOL **NT** TrentReno 18:07:16 7/18/00 (0)
well... MK 16:57:15 7/18/00 (0)
Re: Need some critcism lookoutcow 16:49:39 7/18/00 (0)
You're ugly and you smell like ass. Mr. Killmonkey 16:40:24 7/18/00 (0)

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