Posted by zeta at 207.59.74.4 on October 30, 2001 at 15:12:08:
In Reply to: This is what I had down... posted by kneel b4 the daughter of Jorel on October 30, 2001 at 13:52:12:
I made a couple of changes here. Please read.
When the success of Clerks was determined at Sundance and Cannes, Smith decided to go ahead with two other films in the trilogy. These two films were titled, (insert titles here) and were supposed to complete the Jersey trilogy. Fortunately for Smith, his fans wanted more. This demand for a continuation of his movies and their zany characters paved the way for more Kevin Smith Films. Smith went on to direct Mallrats, Chasing Amy, Dogma, and the newest one, Jay and Silent Bob Strike Back. (You need a clincher sentence here. SOmething that lets the reader know that this is finished. Right now it doesn't sound finished. Take or leave the changes-up to you. Not that great really-just some ideas. I don't know what the rest of your paper says so its hard for me to help with the concluding paragraph) Good Luck!
Zeta
: Now, is that okay for a concluding paragraph about his professional background? If something is wrong with it, please let me know.