Posted by theo14_the_angry_drunken_dwarf at mail.tcofnj.com on February 07, 2002 at 09:20:55:
In Reply to: I need some quick help posted by PeterParker on February 07, 2002 at 06:46:50:
: Which of these sounds better. I need to include them in a poem today for the girl. Just give an honoest opinion. Thanks
:
: 1.When tears fall where we once laid,
: I never let the thoughts fade.
: 2.As tears fall where we once laid,
: I’ll never let the thoughts fade.
: 3.While tears fall where we once laid,
: I never let the thoughts fade.