Posted by PeterParker at nr7-66-161-180-133.fuse.net on February 07, 2002 at 06:46:50:
Which of these sounds better. I need to include them in a poem today for the girl. Just give an honoest opinion. Thanks
1.When tears fall where we once laid,
I never let the thoughts fade.
2.As tears fall where we once laid,
I’ll never let the thoughts fade.
3.While tears fall where we once laid,
I never let the thoughts fade.