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Posted by KoRnMammA at client-151-199-192-154.henrico.k12.va.us on May 21, 2002 at 11:11:53:

In Reply to: Need some feedback on my novel posted by The Bastard (ebas420) on May 21, 2002 at 10:35:14:

What is the book about? You don't give enough information in the 1st 2 paragraphs that
wants me to read on.

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so if you just picked up the book in a Barnes and The Bastard (ebas420) 11:13:31 5/21/02 (21)
- Yeah... KoRnMammA 11:16:34 5/21/02 (20)
  - Need to correct some errors KoRnMammA 11:19:01 5/21/02 (14)
    - ummm yeah...I'm not sure if you're my demographic. The Bastard (ebas420) 11:25:37 5/21/02 (7)
      - what? KoRnMammA 11:28:26 5/21/02 (6)
        
        Worst excuse ever... miss d 12:33:06 5/21/02 (0)
        
        Yeah... The Bastard (ebas420) 11:30:32 5/21/02 (4)
        
        LOL...okay, that was good . NT razordu30 11:37:03 5/21/02 (0)
        
        ok... KoRnMammA 11:33:44 5/21/02 (2)
        
        THREAD OF THE DAY! The Bastard (ebas420) 11:41:04 5/21/02 (1)
        
        Agreed. NT razordu30 11:47:18 5/21/02 (0)
    - Need to correct a few more errors? *nt* miss d 11:21:48 5/21/02 (5)
      - Sorry..... KoRnMammA 11:45:16 5/21/02 (0)
      - She's got it in for old Bob... Pimped-Out-Jedi-Knight 11:25:21 5/21/02 (3)
        
        No, actually... KoRnMammA 11:30:09 5/21/02 (2)
        
        Yeah! I tooootally agree... EmbryoPointZero 11:41:53 5/21/02 (1)
        
        Hey now... KoRnMammA 11:49:55 5/21/02 (0)
  - Dole? *nt* Pimped-Out-Jedi-Knight 11:18:05 5/21/02 (4)
    - Now I got it! Clamdigga 11:32:59 5/21/02 (0)
    - Yeah, I gotsta know to! -nt Clamdigga 11:22:04 5/21/02 (0)
    - That's it! BOB DOLE is the answer! The Bastard (ebas420) 11:20:22 5/21/02 (1)
      - Whooaaaa...... KoRnMammA 11:25:43 5/21/02 (0)

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