Posted by VioLenT BoB (Dr.J0nes) at ac88e74d.ipt.aol.com on July 07, 2002 at 21:01:23:
In Reply to: MY SCRIPT! PLEASE OFFER CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM! posted by kinghippo on July 07, 2002 at 20:51:48:
Men in black lamborghini's do not use chainsaws to dismember men in them...also, which model of the lamborghini HAS a backseat?
And if it did, they also would not use an uzi, in a car, with its windows up and point it anywhere near the gas tank.
They'd be deaf and crispy....
It sounds cruel but the most creatively constructive thing I can tell you is to have sex with a girl, get arrested at least once, maybe attend a university, and leave crime drama to those with some hair on their chest, monkeys on their backs, and skeletons in their closets.
VB