It doesn't rhyme. Where's the skill? *nt*

Posted by C.Jay(RST) at adsl-61-153-14.mia.bellsouth.net on January 24, 2003 at 00:22:50:

In Reply to: Something I'm working on....opinions? posted by Kimberlieo on January 24, 2003 at 00:03:49:

: Buried
: to my neck
: the fragile surface cracks and reforms
: with each breath
: grit in uncomfortable places
: blisters on pale skin
: the surf rises
: and I am
: Buried
: some days I want to crawl
: right down into the earth
: pull a blanket of sod
: over my head
: and sleep
: until I am
: no more
: Buried

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• Ok an old one, just for you Kimberlieo 00:27:39 1/24/03 (2)
  • Why is everything dying... rcpweiner 00:31:54 1/24/03 (1)
    • I'll work on it....nt Kimberlieo 00:32:54 1/24/03 (0)

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