a poem off the top of my head

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Posted by myselfjohn at bgp01113894bgs.westln01.mi.comcast.net on June 02, 2003 at 19:01:23:

losing my soul
all of my being
purpose is gone
nothing left worth seeing
is it drifting away
or even still real
maybe it's still there
but inside I can't feel
If you see my soul
please send it back
I would like to know myself
and get this burden off my back

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Re: Nice Job BTW. *NT Scott Lee AKA Rnswithscissors 20:18:29 6/02/03 (3)
- Re: Since we're providing feedback... Scott Lee AKA Rnswithscissors 20:23:54 6/02/03 (2)
  - Re: Since we're providing feedback... myselfjohn 20:35:16 6/02/03 (1)
    - Re: Since we're providing feedback... Scott Lee AKA Rnswithscissors 20:41:54 6/02/03 (0)
Re: You inspired me... Scott Lee AKA Rnswithscissors 19:43:52 6/02/03 (24)
- re:? myselfjohn 20:00:59 6/02/03 (23)
  - Who are YOU to judge one mans art? Heatherondo.. 20:18:23 6/02/03 (3)
    - I am only myself myselfjohn 20:29:12 6/02/03 (2)
      - Well. I do not take kindly to Heatherondo.. 20:31:45 6/02/03 (1)
        
        Re: Well. I do not take kindly to myselfjohn 20:38:31 6/02/03 (0)
  - Re: re:? Scott Lee AKA Rnswithscissors 20:10:01 6/02/03 (6)
    - Re: re:? myselfjohn 20:21:16 6/02/03 (5)
      - Artistic License! Demosthenes37 20:41:30 6/02/03 (0)
      - Dolt...it's just spelled incorrectly... Queen of Urban Legend 20:32:24 6/02/03 (0)
      - Re: re:? Scott Lee AKA Rnswithscissors 20:29:31 6/02/03 (1)
        
        BAD SCOTT! To the flogging room with you!!! nt Heatherondo.. 20:35:01 6/02/03 (0)
      - www.dictionary.com Heatherondo.. 20:27:30 6/02/03 (0)
  - I like the big words... pickleweasel 20:07:41 6/02/03 (11)
    - Re: I like the big words... myselfjohn 20:14:04 6/02/03 (10)
      - Whats so hard to understand? They are just words! Heatherondo.. 20:23:10 6/02/03 (8)
        
        Re: and being married to you... Scott Lee AKA Rnswithscissors 20:31:43 6/02/03 (7)
        
        Except when i bget those things on my tongue Heatherondo.. 20:36:57 6/02/03 (6)
        
        Completely OT......but Scott & Heather...... SilentFilmStar 20:43:19 6/02/03 (5)
        
        Gracious =-) Heatherondo.. 21:03:50 6/02/03 (3)
        
        Re: Warts? You have warts? Scott Lee AKA Rnswithscissors 21:33:27 6/02/03 (1)
        
        I hope you guys know..... SilentFilmStar 22:04:20 6/02/03 (0)
        
        Sweet--I think I'm going to need a tissue....*NT* SilentFilmStar 21:20:47 6/02/03 (0)
        
        Re: LOL thanks! Scott Lee AKA Rnswithscissors 20:59:27 6/02/03 (0)
      - Re: I like the big words... Scott Lee AKA Rnswithscissors 20:17:23 6/02/03 (0)
Forgive and be forgiven Leesa 19:35:04 6/02/03 (1)
- Re: Forgive and be forgiven Scott Lee AKA Rnswithscissors 19:46:18 6/02/03 (0)
A New Poetry Barry, Suave MF 19:15:12 6/02/03 (3)
- Damn impressive *NT* SilentFilmStar 20:34:44 6/02/03 (0)
- Re: PWWEEEEEEEEEEETTTTTTTTTTTTYYYYY *NT Scott Lee AKA Rnswithscissors 19:55:06 6/02/03 (0)
- Ooooo cool Leesa 19:38:28 6/02/03 (0)
That's pretty deep...... SilentFilmStar 19:09:46 6/02/03 (3)
- Sorry to all offended in an earlier post myselfjohn 19:17:44 6/02/03 (2)
  - I wasn't offended, was just trying to..... SilentFilmStar 20:31:15 6/02/03 (1)
    - Re: I wasn't offended, was just trying to..... myselfjohn 21:00:03 6/02/03 (0)

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