ok one more poem than I'm gone I swear

Posted by myselfjohn at bgp01113894bgs.westln01.mi.comcast.net on June 02, 2003 at 21:22:40:

I am 21 years old now I wrote this when I was 15, I know it by heart. I wrote it to my girlfriend, who was then my ex. I was a really bad person then, i wont go into detail, but she had a right to dump me. Thank god shes with me now. Scott Lee's love story inspired me to share this. Sorry for the f bombs.

You,
ok, I fucked up
never again
I need you
will you please understand
yes I really fucked up
you are really gone
what is life now
will god help me see this through
this can't be real
I know its not
I'm not real
So how can god be real
he is just a rumor now
a fading shadow like me
life is nothing now
without you in my heart
without you on my mind
I am blind now
by myself I'm useless
with you I was whole
with you I was human
with you we were us
with you
always and forever you
I lost you
you

Follow Ups:

• I Got You Barry, Suave MF 21:32:58 6/02/03 (9)
  • Ever published any of your poems?*NT* SilentFilmStar 22:00:13 6/02/03 (1)
    • They're published all right. n/t Barry, Suave MF 22:57:17 6/02/03 (0)
  • I KNEW YOU WERE ALL ABOUT THE SPOON BENDING!! Kimberlieo 21:47:09 6/02/03 (5)
    • Argh! Barry, Suave MF 21:52:48 6/02/03 (4)
      • NO IT'S RIGHT HERE!!!!!! Kimberlieo 21:57:10 6/02/03 (3)
        • It's 'figurative' Barry, Suave MF 21:58:50 6/02/03 (2)
          • drat forgot the pic... Kimberlieo 22:11:26 6/02/03 (0)
          • no dice Kimberlieo 22:10:54 6/02/03 (0)
  • good but did you get the girl?*nt* myselfjohn 21:37:13 6/02/03 (0)
• Sappy. Kev Hoffman 21:32:21 6/02/03 (0)
• Very emotional.......if you must go, SilentFilmStar 21:28:56 6/02/03 (1)
  • I'm not going yet, and I will be back*nt* myselfjohn 21:35:11 6/02/03 (0)
• self-pity......nt* whatandwhy76 21:25:09 6/02/03 (0)

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